Tuesday, 3 March 2015

Omaru creek

Intro:Last week on Thursday as three class we walked down to the dirty and disgusting.Back in those days when I wasn’t born  it was a happy place where people use to swim but now it just full of rubbish and polluted water.Do you ever whant to swim in that distgusting creek?
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Today in class the task is telling us to write the introuduction and to get the audience hooked into my writting. 

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