Persuasive writing - Opinions

WALT: WALT: Plan out a persuasive piece of writing



This week we are learning all about persuasive writing. This presentation is all about my opinion, what we had to do is that we had to read a box that our teacher gave us and we had to put down our own opinion for example: Children allowed to vote, we had to write down what we think about the opinion, we write down how we felt, and what we believe in. 

T2W1 Complex sentences

WALT: Identify the features of complex sentences



Complex sentences. What we have to do with complex sentences was that our teacher gave us a presentation to work on and it had all these different questions and sentences that we had to write and it had an example as well. So please take a look at what I have done so far.

Simple and compound sentences.

WALT: Identify & write simple and compound sentences

This week we have been learning about how we write a simple or a compound sentence. What we did this week is that Mrs Iloa created a presentation for us to work on. The presentation is called Simple and compound sentences. In this presentation there are sentences that I have to write and try figure out what a compound and simple sentence is. I hope you enjoy my simple and compound sentence enjoy my blog and leave a comment of what I need to work on.

My experiment gone wrong - Narrative writing

WALT: Include our senses in our writing

This week we have been learning about an experiment gone wrong. What we did was that we did a narrative writing about anything but it has to do with an experiment that goes totally wrong. On the top on this description there is a narrative writing that I have created and on the side of the writing there is comments that I have done for my checklist. My checklist is out of ten so I hope I get all of these things I need to work on:

1. Title/Orientation
2. Problem
3. Solution
4. Sounds like
5. Smells like
6. Felt like
7. Looked like
8. Tasted like
9. Editing - Punctuation/ Makes sense
10. Paragraphs

So here are the 10 things I need to work on please comment down below and write what I need to work on thankyou.

My reflection on this term ( Term 3 )

WALT: write something on a flash back of what we liked during this term.

Term 3 has been an overwhelming term. There has been a lot of thing that pt england has been through. In team 5 we have had movie trips, visit harold, American dance group danced for us, AL7 & barista team ( Cooking, baking, making hot chocolates and other hot drinks and working with board games group. ) and many other things. This term I have participated in a quiet few things like … .. Netball, our team was called the year 7 Jets, Youthtown with tech and Film festival filmings.

Moments I liked:

Here are some moments I enjoyed through this term. I liked being in a netball team with wonderful friends and wonderful managers and coaches. I liked making a lot of new friends at school and making the new students comfortable with this school. I really enjoy after lunch and sometimes in the morning block and after morning tea blocks because we have maths and maths is my favourite subject in my life, sometimes I enjoy reading and writing. The things I didn’t like was sometimes running for fitness and jump jam, but now I am starting to like Just dance.

My Immersion Assembly recount-As I See It

WALT: Write a full recount


At the starting of the term we had a immersion assembly. Our teachers of each team presented a film and a act out on stage in the school hall. All children was setted in their own spots watching different types of presentations. After that Assembly we had to write a recount brainstorm about the assembly that morning.
I hope you liked my brainstorm on the top of this paragraph. Thank you.