Thursday, 7 August 2014

Punctuating a paragraph

Here is my writing about Punctuating a paragraph.

“Go" yelled dad He was yelling at the tv.While watching the boxing during the commonwealth games. Dad was watching very intensely. David Nyika looked strong. boom! His opponent was knocked to the ground hooray! We all shouted. David won gold and he is a champion. “Wow” I thought I want to be a boxer when I grow up.

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